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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of Boundary Road and I have recently read in the local newspaper that a shopping centre is going to be built near where I live.

This news was rather a surprise to me. I have been living in Boundary Road for five years now and it has always been a very quiet street with very few tall buildings. I think a construction like this will change the atmosphere of the area considerably and, like many other residents I have spoken to, I am not at all happy about it.

I think people who live in the area have a right to know more about the plan before it goes ahead, so I would like to request further details regarding the dates of the planned building work and the size of the centre. Also, I sincerely hope you are planning to provide a car park, as otherwise, parking will become very difficult for everyone in the area.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

John Carlson

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quynh_02

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Dear Mr. John Carlson, I received your letter complaining to the local newspaper that our plan developer will build the shopping center near where you live. As you know, when we built the shopping center, we submitted it to the local government for official approval and we got approval to build this work. In fact, after reading your complaint letter, I fully understand the frustration and disagreement of the people living near this area. Therefore, as the developer of the plan, I will explain to you the reason why we will build the shopping center near where you live. Besides, I would like to send you some information related to your questions. As you know, currently, the economy is developing rapidly; the construction of a shopping center on Boundary Road can help you and the people living in this area more convenient for shopping and entertainment. Furthermore, when we build the shopping center near your area, we will create jobs and increase incomes for people living around that area. In fact, our shopping center is not only the place to shop for fashion, but also combines with mini supermarkets in buying and selling of consumer goods and foods. Thus, it is very convenient for you and the residents living in this area. Regarding your question, the construction that we will bring to completion will last for 1 year. It will start in September this year and it will end in September next year. Besides, we will build the basement with a capacity of about 1,000 cars of all kinds. Therefore, you can come here to shop as much as you want and not worry about not having a parking space. Indeed, I always understand your concerns that our construction will lose the urban beauty of the city. However, I would like to tell you that we always design to match the scale of the surrounding buildings so it would blend into the urban landscape. Hence, I confirm to you that when our work is completed, you and the people living in this area will feel satisfied with the luxurious beauty in each of our design lines. Best regards, Andre Dmitry
Gửi lúc: 23:58:42 ngày 03-08-2021
Điểm: 5/10
Time : 2021-08-05 16:27:50

Dear Mr. John Carlson,

I received your letter complaining to the local newspaper (chưa chính xác mục đích thư đề bài) showing your concerns about that our plan developer will build the shopping center will be built near where you live. As you know, when we built the shopping center, we submitted it to the local government for official approval and we got approval to build this work đó mới chỉ là dự án,  các hành động đều chưa diễn ra nên dùng tương lại đơn .

In fact, after reading your complaint letter, I fully understand the frustration and disagreement of the people living near this area. Therefore, as the developer of the plan, I will explain to you the reason why we will build the shopping center near where you live. thư đề bài không phải thư phàn nàn mà là thư yêu cầu, hỏi thông tin Besides, I would like to send you some information related to your questions.

As you know, currently, the economy is developing rapidly; the construction of a shopping center on Boundary Road can help make (dùng với tính từ) you and the people living in this area more convenient for shopping and entertainment dùng to V sau tính từ. Furthermore, when we build the shopping center near your area, we will create jobs and increase incomes for people living around that area. In fact, our shopping center is not only the place to shop for fashion, but also combines with mini supermarkets in buying and selling of consumer goods and foods. Thus, it is very convenient for you and the residents living in this area.

Regarding your question, the construction that we will bring to completion will last for 1 year. It will start in September this year and it will end in September next year. Besides, we will build the basement with a capacity of about 1,000 cars of all kinds. Therefore, you can come here to shop as much as you want and do not worry about not having a parking space.

Indeed, I always understand your concerns that our construction will lose the urban beauty of the city. However, I would like to tell you that we always design to match the scale of the surrounding buildings so it would blend into the urban landscape. Hence, I confirm to you that when our work is completed, you and the people living in this area will feel satisfied with the luxurious beauty in each of our design lines.

Best regards,
Andre Dmitry

Bạn phản hồi các ý ở những đoạn cuối khá ổn, song bạn hiểu sai mục đích thư đề bài nên viết chưa đúng ở phần đầu. Chú ý khắc phục nhé.

trinhthilieu2010

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Ngày tham gia: 03-05-2021

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Dear Mr. John Carlson, Please let me introduce myself. I am in charge of the project this time, which is a shopping centre planned to be built near Boundary Road as far as you know. Firstly, I would like to give my deepest apology to you and all of the other residents of Boundary Road as well. It is my fault because I did not make an official announcement and give more details in terms of the project to the residents living here. According to your email, I know that you are a long-term resident here, so I can kind of see what you are worried about. But on top of that, I really hope that a wind of change will blow through the area of Boundary Road with the rise of a new shopping centre. So we are looking forward to receiving an agreement from all of the residents here. To be honest, I should have informed the residents like you about this earlier. This project is planned to be initiated the construction at the beginning of the following month. We will take the trouble to ensure its speed of construction and its completion at the earliest. The size of this shopping centre is expected around 150,000 m2. And for that, for the purpose of serving the needs of residents in a better way, we promise faithfully to build a car park after careful consideration. And if you or any resident of Boundary Road have any question or desire about this, I will be up for all. Yours faithfully, John Smith The plan developer
Gửi lúc: 23:44:39 ngày 03-08-2021
Điểm: 4/10
Time : 2021-08-05 16:19:27

Dear Mr. John Carlson,

Please let me introduce myself. I am in charge of the project this time chỉ cần giới thiệu bạn là plan developer theo yêu cầu đề bài, which is a shopping centre planned to be built near Boundary Road as far as you know.

Firstly, I would like to give my deepest apology to you and all of the other residents of Boundary Road as well. It is my fault because I did not make an official announcement  thư đề bài đã chỉ rõ có thông tin trên báo chứ không phải chưa có and give more details in terms of the project to the residents living here. According to your email, I know that you are a long-term resident here, so I can kind of see what you are worried about. But on top of that, I really hope that a wind of change will blow through the area of Boundary Road with the rise of a new shopping centre. So we are looking forward to receiving an agreement from all of the residents here.cần diễn đạt ý về một số lợi ích của việc xây dựng trung tâm thương mại trong vùng

To be honest, I should have informed the residents like you about this earlier. This project is planned to be initiated the construction start at the beginning of the following month. We will take the trouble to ensure its speed of construction and its completion at the earliest. The size of this shopping centre is expected to be around 150,000 m2. And for that, for the purpose of serving the needs of residents in a better way diễn đạt lại, we promise faithfully to build a car park after careful consideration.

And if you or any resident of Boundary Road have any question or desire about this, I will be up for all.

Yours faithfully,
John Smith
The plan developer

Bạn nắm được nội dung và có hướng phản hồi đúng, song diễn đạt rất rối chưa thể hiện rõ ý. Cố gắng nhiều hơn nhé.

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han250305

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Dear Mr. John Carlson, My name is Marry Wilson, a plan developer of the GO project. For the first, I want to thank you for the letter you sent us. And today, I am writing this letter in response to your petitions. It is true that we are planning to build a shopping centre in Boundary Road. We chose this place because we saw its potential for growth. According to the initial plan, a commercial centre will be built with a planned area of ​​3 hectares and an investment of 50 million USD. This center will include a full range of services, such as: shopping mall, dining, supermarket and entertainment. Although this road is still quiet, this area is close to schools and hospitals, and is airy and green. That's why we hope that this project will contribute to changing the atmosphere of this place a lot, as you mentioned. However, we apologize for this inconvenience. We thought we would let everyone know in the near future, but thanks to your letter, we know that we are somewhat wrong, it is true that the resident should have been informed sooner. I sincerely apologize for that. Finally, you may rest assured that we did not forget to build a car park. This is a big plan, and I know it is a very important part. I also thank you for your reminding. We hope that this project will be able to help and satisfy reseident. If you have any problems or questions, feel free to contact me. Yours faithfully, Mary Wilson
Gửi lúc: 22:45:45 ngày 03-08-2021
Điểm: 5/10
Time : 2021-08-05 16:08:31

Dear Mr. John Carlson,

My name is Marry Wilson, a plan developer of the GO project. For the first, I want to thank you for the letter you sent us. And today, I am writing this letter in response to your petitions dùng từ chưa chính xác nghĩa, có thể dùng questions hoặc concerns about ....

It is true that we are planning to build a shopping centre in Boundary Road. We chose this place because we saw its potential for growth. According to the initial plan, a commercial centre will be built with a planned area of ​​3 hectares and an investment of 50 million USD. This center will include a full range of services, such as: shopping mall, dining, supermarket and entertainment. Although this road is still quiet, this area is close to schools and hospitals, and is airy and green. That's why we hope that this project will contribute to the development of this area changing the atmosphere of this place a lot, as you mentioned.

However, we apologize for this inconvenience. We thought we would let everyone know in the near future, but thanks to your letter, we know that we are somewhat wrong, it is true that the resident should have been informed sooner. I sincerely apologize for that. lan man nội dung, kế hoạch đã được thông báo trên báo rồi Finally, you may rest assured that we did not forget to build a car park . This is a big plan, and I know it is a very important part. I also thank you for your reminding.chú ý diễn đạt,kế hoạch này đã có nên không phải do nhắc nhở bạn mới nhớ

We hope that this project will be able to help and satisfy reseident dùng danh từ số nhiều. If you have any problems or questions, feel free to contact me.

Yours faithfully,

Mary Wilson

Bài viết của bạn cơ bản thể hiện được nội dung phản hồi chính, song bạn diễn đạt chưa được tốt lắm, có 1 số thông tin chưa chính xác với thư đề bài.

Điểm: 4.5

"Nothing is impossible."

foxagency

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Dear John Carlson, Thank you for your letter that told us your concern about the new shopping center and your requests for some information. I am writing in response to your letter. Firstly, you and other residents are worrying that our shopping center will break the peace of this place. I am sorry for any inconvenience this may cause to you and the others. And it will be open from 9 a.m to 8 p.m every day so I think the residents will feel less disturbed and still have quiet time in the morning and at night. Moreover, our shopping center will bring many job opportunities for locals and we also promise that we will buy local products such as vegetables, crafts and so on and sell them in the shop. Thus, this shop will contribute a lot to the development of this area. In addition, our shopping center will provide a variety of products so people do not have to drive a long way to the city to buy their favorite goods. I think its benefits will definitely outweigh the drawbacks. Therefore, I really hope you and other residents will be more open-minded about it. Secondly, I am sorry for the missing information about the plan. I would like to answer your questions about the shop in this letter. About the dates of the planned building work, it will be started on 1st September 2021 and will be finished in April 2022. The size of the centre is 37,000 m2 Moreover, I am happy to announce to you that the shop will have a spacious parking lot in front of it so people will feel more comfortable shopping here. I hope that you and other residents will choose to shop in the new shopping center in the future. If you have other questions, please feel free to contact me. Yours faithfully, Ann Smith.
Gửi lúc: 21:54:49 ngày 03-08-2021
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2021-08-05 15:56:31

Dear John Carlson,
Thank you for your letter that told us your concern about the new shopping center and your requests for some information. I am writing in response to your letter.
Firstly, you and other residents are worrying that our shopping center will break the peace of this place. I am sorry for any inconvenience this that (dùng mệnh đề quan hệ) may cause to you and the others. And it will be open from 9 a.m to 8 p.m every day so I think the residents will feel less disturbed and still have quiet time in the morning and at night. Moreover, our shopping center will bring many job opportunities for locals and we also promise that we will buy local products such as vegetables, crafts and so on and sell them in the shop. Thus, this shop will contribute a lot to the development of this area. In addition, our shopping center will provide a variety of products so people do not have to drive a long way to the city to buy their favorite goods. I think its benefits will definitely outweigh the drawbacks. Therefore, I really hope you and other residents will be more open-minded about it.
Secondly, I am sorry for the missing information about the plan. I would like to answer your questions about the shop in this letter. About the dates of the planned building work, it will be started on 1st September 2021 and will be finished dùng thể chủ động với động từ start và finish in April 2022. The size of the centre is 37,000 m2.
Moreover, I am happy to announce to you that the shop will have a spacious parking lot in front of it so people will feel more comfortable shopping here. I hope that you and other residents will choose to shop in the new shopping center in the future. If you have other questions, please feel free to contact me.
Yours faithfully,
Ann Smith.

 

Bài viết của bạn phản hồi khá rõ ràng và đầy đủ nội dung, đặc biệt phần mục đích viết thư bạn viết khá hay. Tuy nhiên, có 1 số lỗi bạn cần khắc phục như sau:

- Bạn tập trung nhiều ý quá về lợi ích của mở trung tâm thương mại, bạn có thể viết ngắn gọn hơn bằng cách liệt kê bởi ý này chưa phải ý chủ đạo

- Cần bổ sung chi tiết hơn về dự án xây dựng trung tâm thương mại

- 1 số lỗi ngữ pháp bạn cần cố gắng về dùng mệnh đề quan hệ và thể chủ động vs bị động


0912513959

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This news was rather a surprise to me. I have been living in Boundary Road for five years now and it has always been a very quiet street with very few tall buildings. I think a construction like this will change the atmosphere of the area considerably and, like many other residents I have spoken to, I am not at all happy about it. I think people who live in the area have a right to know more about the plan before it goes ahead, so I would like to request further details regarding the dates of the planned building work and the size of the centre. Also, I sincerely hope you are planning to provide a car park, as otherwise, parking will become very difficult for everyone in the area.
Gửi lúc: 17:32:21 ngày 03-08-2021
Điểm: 0/10
Time : 2021-08-04 14:33:58

Bạn cần viết thư tới John Carlson với cương vị là người phát triển kế hoạch để phản hồi về thư hỏi kế hoạch chi tiết về dự án xây dựng trung tâm thương mại ở vùng Boundary Road như sau:

Opening: Dear John Carlson,

Body:

- Cám ơn thư bày tỏ sự quan tâm về kế hoạch xây dựng trung tâm thương mại trong vùng Boundary Road 

- Bày tỏ quan điểm về kế hoạch xây dựng trung tâm thương mại ở trong vùng này (dựa trên đánh giá của John Carlson): khu vực này là khu vực yên tĩnh có rất ít tòa nhà cao tầng, chưa có trung tâm thương mại cho nên cần phải thay đổi, phải có sự phát triển trung tâm thương mại phục vụ nhu cầu người dân

- Phản hồi thái độ của người dân nơi này: biết là có dự án thay đổi không khí yên bình của người dân thì họ chưa thể tiếp nhận ngay được, song cần thuyết phục người dân về kế hoạch này cùng với những lợi ích mang lại: mang lại sự phát triển cho khu vực và mang lại việc làm cũng như phục vụ nhu cầu mua sắm của người dân

- Chỉ ra kế hoạch cụ thể của dự án bao gồm: thời gian xây dựng và có sự xây dựng bãi đỗ xe để phục vụ cho khách đến trung tâm thương mại hay không

- Hy vọng khi dự án này triển khai, người dân sẽ ủng hộ và khu vực này sẽ phát triển và người dân sẽ được hưởng lợi ích từ việc này

Closing: Yours faithfully,

Signature: chữ kí

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