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Dear Mai,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in order to ask for a favour from you. Actually, I need the recipe for Vietnamese Noodle Soup from you since I am going to throw a party soon.

Of course, this is going to be a very special party since all of my high school friends are going to get together and have a good time while talking about our works and achievements in life for the first time after finishing high school.

Anyway, the reason, for which, I am asking for this recipe is that I fell in love with this particular soup after eating it at one of the upscale Vietnamese restaurants in my country. So, I thought that it just would be a great idea to introduce this awesome and delicious dish, instead of only those food items which we enjoy on a regular basis, to all of my friends at the party, so that I could impress them with my new idea.

Please get back to me with the recipe of this awesome soup once you read this letter.

Warm wishes,

Adam

Direction: As if you are Mai, read the letter and give a suitable response.


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ĐĂNG PHẢN HỒI CỦA BẠN CHO BÀI HỌC NÀY
CÁC Ý KIẾN BÌNH LUẬN - PHẢN HỒI VỀ BÀI HỌC NÀY

precious02

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Dear Adam, It has been a long time since I last wrote to you. I hope your health and job are fine. Thank you for trusting me and asking me to send you Pho recipes. To be honest, I am glad to hear that you are going to treat your friends to Pho which is a famous dish in my country. Indeed, in each region, there are different Pho recipes, however, they have one thing in common which is that the broth has to be clear and to be sweetened. In fact, the way to cook Pho is quite simple. Therefore, I have made a detailed video tutorial with a soft file of the Pho recipe which is enclosed in this letter. Please read each step and follow the recipes carefully to have a delicious bowl of Pho. Finally, I hope the recipe that I enclosed in this letter can help you successfully cook Pho for the first time at your home to treat your friends. If you have a hard time finding any ingredients, please do not hesitate to contact me. I am ready to buy and send them to you. Best, Mai
Gửi lúc: 23:33:16 ngày 13-07-2021
Điểm: 7/10
Time : 2021-07-15 22:01:46

Dear Adam,

It has been a long time since I last wrote to you. I hope your health and job are fine. Thank you for trusting me and asking me to send you Pho recipes. To be honest, I am glad to hear that you are going to treat your friends to Pho which is a famous dish in my country.

Indeed, in each region, there are different Pho recipes, however, they have one thing in common, which is that the broth that (nên dùng mệnh đề quan giải thích cho danh từ broth, chứ không nên dùng mệnh đề danh ngữ sau mệnh đề quan hệ) has to be clear and to be sweetened.

In fact, the way to cook Pho is quite simple. Therefore, I have made a detailed video tutorial with a soft file of the Pho recipe which is enclosed in this letter. Please read each step and follow the recipes carefully to have a delicious bowl of Pho.

Finally, I hope the recipe that I enclosed in this letter can help you successfully cook Pho for the first time at your home to treat your friends. If you have a hard time finding any ingredients, please do not hesitate to contact me. I am ready to buy and send them to you.

Best,
Mai

Cách viết và giải quyết vấn đề của bạn khá hay, các cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể tóm tắt các bước nấu phở và thêm ý: bạn có thể xem lại chi tiết các bước nấu phở ở video đính kèm thì bài viết sẽ hay hơn.

quynh_02

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Dear Adam, I am surprised at your letter because we have not kept in touch for a long time. How is it going? Hope you are always fine and you have a good job. Actually, I am glad to hear that you will organize a party to meet your friends with Vietnamese Noodle Soup which is a familiar dish in my country. As you know, Vietnamese Noodle Soup is a famous Vietnam dish. They are from ingredients that are easy to find and the way to make them is simple. Therefore, I am willing to send you a recipe for Vietnamese Noodle Soup. They are just my private recipes, but they may be helpful for you. To make Vietnamese Noodle Soup you need to have the following ingredients such as 5 liters of water, 2 kilograms of flat rice noodles, 2 kilograms of beef marrow bone, 1 kilograms of beef muscle,1 kilograms of beef brisket, 1 kilograms of bean sprouts, 500 grams of steak boneless, 400 grams of onion, 200 grams of green onion, 60 grams of ginger, 55 grams of rock sugar, 10 grams of white pepper, 5 grams of cinnamon, 4 grams of dried tangerine peel, 4 grams of coriander seeds, 5 chilly, 3 grams of cumin seeds, 3 lemons, 3 cloves, 2 star anises, 4 tablespoons salt, 1 teaspoon of monosodium glutamate and some of leaves basil and coriander. To keep the stew as clear as possible, you may blanch the bones. Firstly, you place the beef marrow bones, the beef muscles and the beef briskets in a pot filled with water and bring to a boil over high heat. As the pot of water brings to a boil, you turn off the stove; you pour the beef marrow bones and beef muscles into the sink and you wash all the meat and bones. This step is very important to achieve clear broth. Secondly, you put the pan on the stove and wait for the pan to be heated. Then, you pour the cloves, the cinnamon, the star anise, the dried tangerine peel, the black cardamom, the coriander seeds and cumin seeds. You toast them until they are fragrant. Next, you put them into a little drawstring bag and tie them up. Thirdly, you put the washed clear bones in the pot. Next, you pour 5 liters of water and add the beef muscles, the beef briskets, 4 tablespoons salt, 2 tablespoons of the rock sugar, a fragrant little bag, pre-grilled and smashed ginger. You cook until the water boils. You take a large spoon to scoop off the scum that floats on top of the liquid. Then you decrease the minimum gas level. You stew the muscles and the beef briskets for 1 hour until they are tender, then you take out and soak in cold water to prevent the meat from turning brown. You continue cooking on a low temperature for another 3 hours in order that the broth is sweetened. During the stewing process, the broth may be evaporated, so you should add more water if necessary in order to ensure the broth is equal to the initial amount of water. Then, you taste and adjust seasonings. Fourthly, you take out the beef which is being soaked in cold water. You cut them into thin slices, each about 1–1.5cm thick. Next, you bring the pot of water to a boil, and then you blanch the white noodles and bean sprouts for 15 seconds and pour them out. Finally, you take a large white porcelain bowl, then you put flat rice noodles and bean sprouts on the bowl, you arrange sliced beef and steak boneless. Then you pour the broth, sprinkle pepper over the flat rice noodles, and decorate with some fresh green onion. You serve it with basil, coriander, a lemon, and a chilly. Again, I am glad to help you. I hope that I will help you cook the Vietnamese Noodle Soup well, and I also hope you will do this flat rice noodles successfully. Write to me soon and tell me all your news. Yours, Mai
Gửi lúc: 22:41:37 ngày 13-07-2021
Điểm: 8/10
Time : 2021-07-15 22:18:14

Dear Adam,

I am surprised at your letter because we have not kept in touch for a long time. How is it going? Hope you are always fine and you have a good job không liên quan đến nội dung thư. Actually, I am glad to hear that you will organize a party to meet your friends with Vietnamese Noodle Soup which is a familiar dish in my country.

As you know, Vietnamese Noodle Soup is a famous Vietnam dish. They are from bạn thiếu động từ, bạn nên dùng cấu trúc với be made from ingredients that are easy to find and the way to make them is simple. Therefore, I am willing to send you a recipe for Vietnamese Noodle Soup. They are just my private recipes chỉ có 1 công thức thôi, dùng đại từ thay thế cho danh từ số ít, but they may be helpful for you.

To make Vietnamese Noodle Soup you need to have the following ingredients such as including (đã dùng following rồi thì nên dùng including) 5 liters of water, 2 kilograms of flat rice noodles, 2 kilograms of beef marrow bone, 1 kilograms of beef muscle,1 kilograms of beef brisket, 1 kilograms of bean sprouts, 500 grams of steak boneless, 400 grams of onion, 200 grams of green onion, 60 grams of ginger, 55 grams of rock sugar, 10 grams of white pepper, 5 grams of cinnamon, 4 grams of dried tangerine peel, 4 grams of coriander seeds, 5 chilly, 3 grams of cumin seeds, 3 lemons, 3 cloves, 2 star anises, 4 tablespoons salt, 1 teaspoon of monosodium glutamate and some of leaves basil and coriander.

To keep the stew as clear as possible, you may blanch the bones. Firstly, you place the beef marrow bones, the beef muscles and the beef briskets in a pot filled with water and bring to a boil over high heat. As the pot of water brings to a boil, you turn off the stove; you pour the beef marrow bones and beef muscles into the sink and you wash all the meat and bones. This step is very important to achieve clear broth.

Secondly, you put the pan on the stove and wait for the pan to be heated. Then, you pour the cloves, the cinnamon, the star anise, the dried tangerine peel, the black cardamom, the coriander seeds and cumin seeds. You toast them until they are fragrant. Next, you put them into a little drawstring bag and tie them up.

Thirdly, you put the washed clear bones in the pot. Next, you pour 5 liters of water and add the beef muscles, the beef briskets, 4 tablespoons salt, 2 tablespoons of the rock sugar, a fragrant little bag, pre-grilled and smashed ginger. You cook until the water boils. You take a large spoon to scoop off the scum that floats on top of the liquid. Then you decrease the minimum gas level. You stew the muscles and the beef briskets for 1 hour until they are tender, then you take out and soak in cold water to prevent the meat from turning brown. You continue cooking on with a low temperature for another 3 hours in order that the broth is sweetened. During the stewing process, the broth may be evaporated, so you should add more water if necessary in order to ensure the broth is equal to the initial amount of water. Then, you taste and adjust seasonings.

Fourthly, you take out the beef which is being soaked in cold water. You cut them into thin slices, each about 1–1.5cm thick. Next, you bring the pot of water to a boil, and then you blanch the white noodles and bean sprouts for 15 seconds and pour them out.

Finally, you take a large white porcelain bowl, then you put flat rice noodles and bean sprouts on the bowl, you arrange sliced beef and steak boneless. Then you pour the broth, sprinkle pepper over the flat rice noodles, and decorate with some fresh green onion. You serve it with basil, coriander, a lemon, and a chilly.

Again, I am glad to help you. I hope that I will help you cook the Vietnamese Noodle Soup well, and I also hope you will do this flat kind of rice noodles successfully. Write to me soon and tell me all your news.

Yours,
Mai

 

Bài viết của bạn viết rõ ràng, chi tiết các nội dung phản hồi đặc biệt là các bước nấu món phở. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chọn lọc ý về caccs bước nấu món phở để bài viết cô đọng hơn nhé.

Điểm: 8.5

vudz1234

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Hi, i'm glad you said nice words to my country and i love it so i'll show you the amazing food of hanoi and vietnam : Step 1: Prepare the ingredients – Carrots, onions, tomatoes, scallions washed. Shredded carrots; onion, tomato tonic areca; sliced ​​onions. These are the ingredients that make stir-fried pho more attractive and delicious. – Beef is washed and thinly sliced, marinated with a few seasoning seeds, sliced ​​fresh ginger. Preliminary preparation of ingredients for stir-fried pho Seasoning for stir-fried beef. (Photo: Internet) Step 2: Stir-fry beef - Fry the dried onion with a little cooking oil in the pan, add the beef and sauté it on high heat until the beef is just barely cooked, pour the meat onto a plate. Step 3: Boil the vegetables - Cut off the roots, wash, boil briefly and then soak in a bowl of cold water to make the vegetables green. Step 4: How to make beef stir-fry noodle soup – Put the pan on the stove, add a little oil, then add the pho noodles and stir-fry, using chopsticks to spread the noodles. Put the pho noodles on a plate. – Heat another pan with a little oil, in turn add carrots, onions, broccoli and tomatoes. - When the ingredients are almost cooked, pour the beef into the stir-fry. This step stir-fry quickly so that the vegetables are crispy, the beef is not too thorough. Finally, add the pho noodles and mix well with the laksa leaves. Adjust seasoning to taste. Step 5: Enjoy – Turn off the stove and pour the beef noodle soup on a plate to enjoy while it is still hot.
Gửi lúc: 21:09:04 ngày 13-07-2021
Điểm: 1/10
Time : 2021-07-15 21:48:50

Opening?

Hi,viết hoa đại từ nhân xưng I i'm glad you said nice words to my country and i love it so i'll show you the amazing food of hanoi and vietnam chú ý cách diễn đạt và làm rõ ý: Step 1: Prepare the ingredients
– Carrots, onions, tomatoes, scallions washed. Shredded carrots; onion, tomato tonic areca; sliced ​​onions. These are the ingredients that make stir-fried pho more attractive and delicious.

– Beef is washed and thinly sliced, marinated with a few seasoning seeds, sliced ​​fresh ginger.


Preliminary preparation of ingredients for stir-fried pho

Seasoning for stir-fried beef. (Photo: Internet)

Step 2: Stir-fry beef
- Fry the dried onion with a little cooking oil in the pan, add the beef and sauté it on high heat until the beef is just barely cooked, pour the meat onto a plate.

Step 3: Boil the vegetables
- Cut off the roots, wash, boil briefly and then soak in a bowl of cold water to make the vegetables green.

Step 4: How to make beef stir-fry noodle soup
– Put the pan on the stove, add a little oil, then add the pho noodles and stir-fry, using chopsticks to spread the noodles. Put the pho noodles on a plate.

– Heat another pan with a little oil, in turn add carrots, onions, broccoli and tomatoes.

- When the ingredients are almost cooked, pour the beef into the stir-fry. This step stir-fry quickly so that the vegetables are crispy, the beef is not too thorough. Finally, add the pho noodles and mix well with the laksa leaves. Adjust seasoning to taste.

Step 5: Enjoy
– Turn off the stove and pour the beef noodle soup on a plate to enjoy while it is still hot
.cần diễn đạt theo văn phong viết, sử dụng các từ nối để liệt kê chứ không phải step 1,2 , ... để liệt kê

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Signature?

 

Bạn chưa hoàn thiện cấu trúc thư, nội dung thư chưa rõ ràng.

Bạn cần hoàn thiện cấu trúc thư cũng như nội dung theo gợi ý sau:

- Thể hiện thái độ vui mừng khi nhận được thư của Adam và biết cô ấy sắp có 1 bữa tiệc gặp mặt những người bạn cấp 3

- Cám ơn vì sự yêu thích và quan tâm đến món phở của đất nước Việt Nam, đặc biệt là những lời khen dành cho món phở đó

- Cám ơn vì ý tưởng giới thiệu món ăn này tới các bạn cấp 3 của cô ấy trong bữa tiệc gặp mặt, giúp quảng bá văn hóa Việt Nam đến với bạn bè quốc tế

- Thể hiện thái độ sẵn sàng chia sẻ công thức nấu món ăn này cho Adam (chia sẻ công thức nấu)

- Hy vọng Adam sẽ nấu món phở thành công và gây ấn tượng tốt với bạn bè cô ấy

- Chúc cho buổi gặp gỡ bạn bè với những kế hoạch chia sẻ công việc và những thành công trong cuộc sống của họ thân mật, vui vẻ

vubeo

troi_datcainaohon

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Dear Adam I have received your letter and I feel so glad when knowing that you want to make Vietnamese Noodle Soup for your high school friends in your special party. Before sharing the recipe, I want to talk about ingredients. Making Vietnamese Noodle soup, You need noodle, a chicken, bones, ginger, spring onion. Immediatelly, I will share the recipe with you. First of all, you have to stew the bones to make the bouillon. You should stew it at least 30 minutes, If you have much time, you will stew it as long as possible. Do not forget to put a little of ginger in your bouillon. It will help you have a sweet and smell bouillon. Next, you need hard- boiled the chicken. Then you slice the chicken. When the chicken and bouillon are finish. Let’s put noodle, chicken,bouillon in the bowl and decorate it with spring onion. I hope that you will have a meaningfull party and all your friend will love our Vietnamese Noodle Soup. Do not forget to tell me about your party. I am lookung forward to receiving your letter. Best wishes, Mai
Gửi lúc: 20:35:34 ngày 13-07-2021
Điểm: 5/10
Time : 2021-07-15 21:43:06

Dear Adam,
I have dùng quá khứ đơn đối với hành động đã xảy ra và hoàn tất trong quá khứ received your letter and I feel so glad when knowing that you want to make Vietnamese Noodle Soup for your high school friends in your special party.
Before sharing the recipe, I want to talk about ingredients. Making dùng to V chỉ mục đích Vietnamese Noodle soup, You need noodle, a chicken, bones, ginger, spring onion. Immediatelly, I will share the recipe with you thêm ý: After preparing the ingredients, you must follow some steps to cook noodle soup. First of all, you have to stew the bones to make the bouillon. You should stew it at least 30 minutes, If you have much time, you will dùng điều kiện loại 0 stew it as long as possible. Do not forget to put a little of ginger in your bouillon. It will help you have a sweet and smell bouillon. Next, you need hard- boiled the chicken chú ý dùng cụm từ the + adj + N. Then you slice the chicken. When the chicken and bouillon are finish dùng PII trong câu bị động. Let’s put noodle, chicken,bouillon in the bowl and decorate it with spring onion.
I hope that you will have a meaningfull party and all your friend will love our Vietnamese Noodle Soup. Do not forget to tell me about your party. I am lookung chính tả forward to receiving your letter.
Best wishes,
Mai

Bài viết của bạn cơ bản phản hồi đầy đủ các nội dung của thư đề bài, song bạn viết còn sơ sài, đặc biệt là thành phần và các bước nấu phở và nhiều ý chưa đúng ngữ pháp.

Điểm: 5.5

*don't you ever wish you were someone else*

chip609

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Caybaiviet
Gửi lúc: 17:48:05 ngày 13-07-2021
Điểm: 0/10
Time : 2021-07-15 15:46:45

Bạn cần viết thư tới Adam với cương vị là Mai để phản hồi thư hỏi công thức nấu phở Việt Nam như sau:

Opening: Dear Adam,

Body:

- Thể hiện thái độ vui mừng khi nhận được thư của Adam và biết cô ấy sắp có 1 bữa tiệc gặp mặt những người bạn cấp 3

- Cám ơn vì sự yêu thích và quan tâm đến món phở của đất nước Việt Nam, đặc biệt là những lời khen dành cho món phở đó

- Cám ơn vì ý tưởng giới thiệu món ăn này tới các bạn cấp 3 của cô ấy trong bữa tiệc gặp mặt, giúp quảng bá văn hóa Việt Nam đến với bạn bè quốc tế

- Thể hiện thái độ sẵn sàng chia sẻ công thức nấu món ăn này cho Adam (chia sẻ công thức nấu)

- Hy vọng Adam sẽ nấu món phở thành công và gây ấn tượng tốt với bạn bè cô ấy

- Chúc cho buổi gặp gỡ bạn bè với những kế hoạch chia sẻ công việc và những thành công trong cuộc sống của họ thân mật, vui vẻ

CLosing: Best wishes,

Signature: Mai



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