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Dear Rosy,
I am so grateful that I finally found someone I can write to on a regular basis! Thank you for agreeing to be my pen pal, I appreciate it very much. I know that we both already have an idea about each other, but I’d like to tell you a bit more about myself.
I really enjoy reading books and try to read at least two a week. Sometimes it is hard to keep up with this schedule, especially while going to university and working at the coffee shop, but I try my best. I also really like movies and will sometimes watch a movie from a book after I have read the book just to see if they’re different and to see which I like more. Usually the book is better.
Please write and tell me more about yourself, I’d love to hear.
Talk with you soon!
Daisy

Direction: As if you are Rosy, read the letter and give a suitable response.


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foxagency
Gửi lúc: 2021-06-29 23:00:41
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thanh294
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CÁC Ý KIẾN BÌNH LUẬN - PHẢN HỒI VỀ BÀI HỌC NÀY

precious02

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Ngày tham gia: 28-09-2014

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Dear Daisy, I am really happy to receive your letter. Indeed, although we have just made friends via the letter and have not met each other in real life, through your letter, I realized that we had many characteristics as well as hobbies the same. After reading your letter, I felt happy and I wanted to know about you as much as possible. I graduated from the College of Tourism & Hotel Management. I am now working at the Sales & Marketing Department of Blue Hotel in Singapore. Reading books and playing sports are my hobbies. I love playing sports such as volleyball, basketball and badminton. I often play sports every afternoon after my work. In reality, I have a habit of reading books before going to bed and I have continued this habit for 4 years. Moreover, I adore watching the US Master Chef and I wish one day I will be able to participate in this program. I am currently living in Singapore with my parents. Therefore, in the summer, if possible, I would be very happy to meet you in my country so that you can visit it and we can meet. It is my wish. I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter. I hope that we can become good friends. Yours, Rosy
Gửi lúc: 23:54:22 ngày 29-06-2021
Điểm: 5/10
Time : 2021-06-30 21:49:53

Dear Daisy,

I am really happy to receive your letter. Indeed, although we have just made friends via the letter and have not met each other in real life, through your letter, I realized that we had many characteristics as well as hobbies the same in common (the same đứng trước danh từ). After reading your letter, I felt happy and I wanted to know about you as much as possible.

I graduated from the College of Tourism & Hotel Management. I am now working at the Sales & Marketing Department of Blue Hotel in Singapore. Reading books and playing sports are my hobbies. I love playing sports such as volleyball, basketball and badminton. I often play sports every afternoon after my work. In reality, I have a habit of reading books before going to bed and I have continued this habit for 4 years. Moreover, I adore watching the US Master Chef and I wish one day I will lùi thì trong câu ao ước với wish be able to participate in this program.

I am currently living in Singapore with my parents. Therefore, in the summer, if possible, I would be very happy to meet you in my country so that you can visit it and we can meet. It is my wish.

I am already eagerly awaiting dùng cấu trúc tobe + adj + to V your reply to this first letter. I hope that we can become good friends.

Yours,
Rosy

Bài viết của bạn viết khá rõ ràng sự phản hồi chia sẻ về sở thích của bạn, song bạn cần phản hồi về sở thích của Daisy nhé. Bạn có thể nêu quan điểm của bạn đối với sở thích đó, chia sẻ cảm nhận của bạn về sở thích đó.

Điểm: 6.5

quynh_02

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Ngày tham gia: 08-12-2015

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Dear Daisy, I am very glad to receive your letter. This is the first time we write the letter to each other. And I am very happy to be your pen pal. From your letter, I can understand a part of your hobby. I would love to tell you about my hobby as well as my study. I am a sophomore at FTU. My major is International Economic Relations. My house is opposite the school. Therefore, it takes me 5 minutes to go to school. Sometimes, I am a little lazy and I do not leave my bed until my mom urges me “Get up Rosy, you will be late!”. Just like you, you and I have many hobbies in common. I like reading books. There is an "enormous library" in my own room. When I have time, I usually read them without caring about the time. Therefore, my mom always advises me not to read books too much because it can affect my eyes. In addition, I also like playing musical instruments although I just can play some easy and simple pieces of music. Besides reading books, I also enjoy making cakes. I can make delicious cakes for the whole family to enjoy after I watched them on Youtube channel. Finally, I am very delighted to be your friend and particularly interested in your hobby described in the letter. I hope that we will keep in touch and write to each other more usually to know more about the hobbies as well as daily activities of both of us. I hope you and I will meet and talk with each other in the near future. Yours, Rosy
Gửi lúc: 23:25:51 ngày 29-06-2021
Điểm: 6/10
Time : 2021-06-30 21:44:28

Dear Daisy,

I am very glad to receive your letter. This is the first time we write dùng hiện tại hoàn thành với this is the first time the letter to each other. And I am very happy to be your pen pal. From your letter, I can understand a part of your hobby. I would love to tell you about my hobby as well as my study.

I am a sophomore at FTU. My major is International Economic Relations. My house is opposite the school. Therefore, it takes me 5 minutes to go to school. Sometimes, I am a little lazy and I do not leave my bed until my mom urges me “Get up Rosy, you will be late!”.

Just like you, đã dùng in common rồi you and I have many hobbies in common. I like reading books. There is an "enormous library" in my own room. When I have time, I usually read them without caring about the time. Therefore, my mom always advises me not to read books too much because it can affect my eyes. In addition, I also like playing musical instruments although I just can play some easy and simple pieces of music. Besides reading books, I also enjoy making cakes. I can make delicious cakes for the whole family to enjoy after I watched chú ý tương quan thì khi dùng mệnh đề trạng ngữ chỉ thời gian them on Youtube channel.

Finally, I am very delighted to be your friend and particularly interested in your hobby described in the letter. I hope that we will keep in touch and write to each other more usually often to know more about the hobbies as well as daily activities of both of us. I hope you and I will meet and talk with each other in the near future.

Yours,
Rosy

Nhìn chung, bài viết của bạn triển khai ý rõ ràng, đặc biệt là nội dung phản hồi câu hỏi chia sẻ về bạn, về sở thích của bạn. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên bổ sung chi tiết hơn sự phản hồi về sở thích của Daisy như nhận xét về sở thích đó, cảm nhận của bạn ...

Điểm: 6.5

hoangdung209

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Ngày tham gia: 19-05-2016

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qfewwwwwwwwww
Gửi lúc: 22:35:40 ngày 29-06-2021
Điểm: 0/10
Time : 2021-06-30 16:04:34

Bạn cần viết thư tới Daisy với cương vị là Rosy để phản hồi thư chia sẻ về bản thân cô ấy, sở thích của cô ấy như sau:

Opening: Dear Daisy,

Body:

- Cám ơn thư của Daisy, cám ơn vì đã là bạn qua thư của mình

- Thể hiện sự ấn tượng của bạn đối với sở thích của cô ấy: đọc sách, đọc ít nhất 2 lần 1 tuần và xem phim, đặc biệt những bộ phim dựa trên sách; so sánh giữa sách và phim

- Chia sẻ về sở thích của bạn

- Hy vọng tình bạn qua thư này của các bạn sẽ duy trì bền vững và gắn kết hơn

CLosing: Love,

Signature: Rosy

foxagency

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Ngày tham gia: 13-03-2020

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Dear Daisy, I am also happy to become your pen pal. Although we have just known about each other for a short time, I can feel that you are so nice and friendly. Thanks for sharing me about your hobbies. I must say that you have such a good habbit of reading books that makes me admire you. Dispite being so busy with your study and partime job but you still keep up with your schedule that i think only a few students can do it. About reading books, I am not keen on that but there are some books that I love, I can read them again and again. In addition, I feel interested in the way you watch movies. You can read book and watch the move from it latter so you can understand more and compare each other. That sounds very good. I also agree with you that usually the book is better than the movie because we can understand more and use our imagination. About myself, I also love watching movies like you and I perfer english movies because they are fascinating and help me to learn English. Besides, I like jogging and go cycling. I do it whenever I have free time at night or at weekends. I find them relax and healthy.nDo you play any sports? Please share with me about your favorite sports. I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Rosy.
Gửi lúc: 23:00:41 ngày 29-06-2021
Điểm: 8/10
Time : 2021-06-30 21:32:50

Dear Daisy,
I am also happy to become your pen pal. Although we have just known about each other for a short time, I can feel that you are so nice and friendly. Thanks for sharing me about your hobbies.
I must say that you have such a good habbit of reading books that makes me admire you. Dispite being so busy with your study and partime job but you still keep up with your schedule that i viết hoa đại từ nhân xưng I think only a few students can do it. About reading books, I am not keen on that but there are some books that I love, I can read them again and again. In addition, I feel interested in the way you watch movies. You can read book and watch the move from it latter, so you can understand more and compare each other them. That sounds very good. I also agree with you that usually the book is usually better than the movie because we can understand more and use our imagination.
About myself, I also love watching movies like you and I perfer english movies because they are fascinating and help me to learn English. Besides, I like jogging and going (Ving sau like) cycling. I do it whenever I have free time at night or at weekends. I find them relax dùng tính từ, chú ý tương quan khi dùn and and healthy.nDo you play any sports? Please share with me about your favorite sports. I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Rosy.

Bài viết của bạn giải quyết vấn đề khá rõ ràng, các ý triển khai tương đối tốt. Tuy nhiên, có 1 số lỗi ngữ pháp bạn cần lưu ý để khắc phục nhé.

 

Điểm: 7.5

d73

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Ngày tham gia: 09-04-2011

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Dear Daisy, First of all, I am very surprised to hear you say that you like to read books because young people today are gradually addicted to electronic devices, both adults and children, such as learning, entertainment, and of course the internet has its bile is bad and good and it affects children a lot. And books are very good because the content is censored. But I have to tell you that you should not force yourself to read so many books, we read books to take a break and absorb knowledge so I recommend you Read a book early in the morning, that's when your soul is at peace, and you can focus on doing everything for the new day.And you should take part in playing sports, it is good for you.And my hobby is watch the Korean films and i hate reading book.Ha ha Love! Rosy
Gửi lúc: 21:01:18 ngày 29-06-2021
Điểm: 2/10
Time : 2021-06-30 21:17:31

Dear Daisy,

First of all, I am very surprised to hear you say that you like to read books because young people today, including both adults and children, are gradually addicted to electronic devices, both adults and children, such as f[removed]chỉ mục đích) learning, entertainment, and of course the internet has its bile is bad and good and it affects children a lot hơi lan man. And books are very good because the content is censored. But I have to tell you that you should not force yourself to read so many books, we read books to take a break and absorb knowledge so I recommend you Read a book early in the morning, that's when your soul is at peace, and you can focus on doing everything for the new day có quá nhiều ý trong câu, cần diễn đạt lại để tránh câu run-on.And you should take part in playing sports, because it is good for you.And my hobby is watching (Ving sau tobe để nói về sở thích) the Korean films and i hate reading book.Ha ha
Love!

Rosy

Bạn viết bài diễn đạt lủng củng, các ý lan man và chưa có sự phản hồi rõ ràng.

Bạn cần viết thư tới Daisy với cương vị là Rosy để phản hồi thư chia sẻ về bản thân cô ấy, sở thích của cô ấy như sau:

- Cám ơn thư của Daisy, cám ơn vì đã là bạn qua thư của mình

- Thể hiện sự ấn tượng của bạn đối với sở thích của cô ấy: đọc sách, đọc ít nhất 2 lần 1 tuần và xem phim, đặc biệt những bộ phim dựa trên sách; so sánh giữa sách và phim

- Chia sẻ về sở thích của bạn

- Hy vọng tình bạn qua thư này của các bạn sẽ duy trì bền vững và gắn kết hơn



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