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Some people focus on news in their own country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


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Nguyenminhtuoi

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The news appears every day in a lot of different media, and that news can be in their own country or international news. Some people are point on news in domestic, the other ones think that it is more important to be the attention of foreign news. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before I give my opinion. Firstly, some people are interested in the news in their own country. Every day, there is a lot of news in the country which needs to be of interest to the people. They are economy, politics, the status of the covid epidemic, and so on. Through domestic news, this will help people know the problems that are happening in their country. For example, through the domestic news, we know how the covid-19 epidemic situation is happening in the provinces and cities in our country, how the people's lives are, and the mutual support between the person to person, the place to other places during this pandemic. Therefore, it is important to be interested in the domestic news. Secondly, the other ones think that it is more important to be the attention of international news. Nowadays, we have lived in the communication between countries around the world, so taking world news can bring us a lot of useful information. For example, during the covid pandemic, we know where this virus came from, which countries have been infected, and how to prevent and control the epidemic. We can use modern technology to help the patients, and we also know that we have a vaccine against covid, which is keeping people healthy. Therefore, foreign news is very essential. In summary, both sides of this argument have strong support. However, after analyzing the two camps, I agree with some people who are interested in the domestic news.
Gửi lúc: 21:58:07 ngày 31-08-2021
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Time : 2021-10-23 18:23:41

 

The news appears every day in a lot of different media, and that news can be in their our own country or international news. Some people are point on news in favor of domestic news, the other ones think that it is more important to be the pay attention of to foreign news. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before I give my opinion.

Firstly, some people are interested in the news in their own country. Every day, there is a lot of news in the country which needs to be of interest to the cared by people. They are economy, politics, the status of the covid epidemic, and so on. Through domestic news, this will help people know the problems that are happening in their country. For example, through the domestic news, we know how the covid-19 epidemic situation is happening in the provinces and cities in our country, how the people's lives are, and the mutual support between the person to and person, the place to other and places during this pandemic. Therefore, it is important to be interested in the pay attention to domestic news.

Secondly, the other ones think that it is more important to be the pay attention of to international news. Nowadays, we have lived in the communication between countries around the world, so taking reading world news can bring us a lot of useful information. For example, during the covid pandemic, we know where this virus came from, which countries have been infected, and how to prevent and control the epidemic. We can use modern technology to help the patients, and we also know that we have a can vaccinate against covid, which is keeps people healthy. Therefore, foreign news is very essential.

In summary, both sides of this argument have strong supports. However, after analyzing the two camps, I agree with some people who are interested in the domestic news.

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BuiLeMinhHang

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Nowadays, we could easily gain access to news and our daily conversations usually circle around the message delivered by the press. Some people believe that reading news about world problems is vital while others claim that domestic news is a must-focus to all individuals. While I am more likely to stand in agreement with the latter statement, both points of view are convincing due to the following reasons. Concerning the former view, keeping abreast of international issues could bring quite a lot of benefits in distinct aspects such as environment or health. For instance, by keeping ourselves posted about global warming and climate change all around the world, which is rarely mentioned by journalists in our country, we will have more appropriate decisions to protect the Earth by traveling by public transportation and planting more trees. Additionally, we can be informed about the health problems while reading world news, so that we will have the opportunities to prevent the pandemic more suitably. For example, when it comes to the beginning of the COVID-19 health crisis in 2019, the preventive measures were taken extremely carefully; therefore, the number of infectious cases was low compared to that of other nations in the world. As for national news, there are lots of advantages when reading it because we could keep ourselves up-to-date with the issues in our country. In comparison with international news, domestic news allows us to stay abreast of the latest events that are more related to our lives. Financial news about the job market is one of the examples of that, helping start-ups to run their own business or graduates to find employment. Moreover, political news is also a must-read for all the citizens because it gives them the chance to gain more knowledge about the Minister and president, thus being able to cast their vote for a true candidate when electing. In conclusion, both world news and news in our nation are crucial and it will be absolutely perfect if we can be kept informed by reading two of them. However, if we don't have enough time or if we have to decide to choose one, national news is a better choice in my book.
Gửi lúc: 21:41:41 ngày 31-08-2021
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Time : 2021-10-23 18:23:21

 

Nowadays, we could easily gain access to news and our daily conversations usually circle around the messages delivered by the press. Some people believe that reading news about world problems is vital while others claim that domestic news is a must-focus to all individuals. While I am more likely to stand in agreement with the latter statement, both points of view are convincing due to the following reasons.

Concerning the former view, keeping abreast of international issues could bring quite a lot of benefits in distinct aspects such as environment or health. For instance, by keeping ourselves posted about global warming and climate change all around the world, which is rarely mentioned by journalists in our country, we will have more appropriate decisions to protect the Earth by traveling by public transportation and planting more trees. Additionally, we can be informed about of the health problems while reading world news, so that we will have the opportunities to prevent the pandemic more suitably. For example, when it comes to the beginning of the COVID-19 health crisis in 2019, the preventive measures were taken extremely carefully; therefore, the number of infectious cases was low compared to that of other nations in the world.

As for national news, there are lots of advantages when reading it because we could keep ourselves up-to-date with the issues in our country. In comparison with international news, domestic news allows us to stay abreast of the latest events that are more related to our lives. Financial news about the job market is one of the examples of that, helping start-ups to run their own business or graduates to find employment. Moreover, political news is also a must-read for all the citizens because it gives them the chance to gain more knowledge about the Minister and president, thus being able to cast their vote for a true candidate when electing.

In conclusion, both world news and news in our nation are crucial and it will be absolutely perfect if we can be kept informed by reading two of them. However, if we don't have enough time or if we have to decide to choose one, national news is a better choice in my book.

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sontung689

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We live in a modern era, all domestic and foreign news can be provided quickly via the internet. Nowadays, our daily conversations revolve around the news a lot. According to some people, we should pay attention on news in their own country and some some people think it is more important to be aware of international news. In this essay, i will discuss both views and give my opinion. In my opinion, when in my country, the most important thing is the news in my country. Mainly for the household to know what is happening in their country? What risks will occur? Will natural disasters affect me? They do so to know important information to the household's life to know what harm will happen in order to prevent and find the most effective measures. As for international information, you can also be interested because you can know what events are happening outside your home country in other countries to expand your entertainment knowledge. But in my opinion, the most important thing is in our country because the important thing that we care about is related to our life, to our own health and safety. And we may still be interested in some news in other countries. In conclusion,we can know as much information at home and abroad as possible.When we know a lot of news, we easily expand our knowledge, feel that the earth has a lot of things we need to know.
Gửi lúc: 19:53:14 ngày 31-08-2021
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Time : 2021-10-23 18:22:58

 

We live in a modern society era, all domestic and foreign news can be provided quickly via the internet. Nowadays, our daily conversations revolve around the news a lot. According to some people, we should pay attention on to news in their own country and some some people think it is more important to be aware of international news. In this essay, i will discuss both views and give my opinion.

In my opinion, when in my country, the most important thing is the news in my country. Mainly for the household to know what is happening in their country, what risks will occur, will natural disasters affect me? They do so to know important information to the household's life to know and what harm will happen in order to prevent and find the most effective measures. As for international information, you can also be interested because you can know what events are happening outside your home country, in other countries to expand your entertainment knowledge. But in my opinion, the most important thing is in our country because the important thing that we care about is related to our life, to our own health and safety. And we may still be interested in some news in other countries.

In conclusion,we can know as much information at home and abroad as possible.When we know a lot of news, we easily expand our knowledge, feel that the earth has a lot of things we need to know.

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cần lưu ý những phần cô sửa ở trên nhé!

em của ngày hôm qua

1234562

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The speed of development in technology makes people easier to update news every time they surfing the internet. Some people mainly read domestic news. While others claim that we should take care of international news due to many reasons. From my point of view, each of these statements has pros and cons. In this essay I will both perspectives. On one hand, local news is the news helps you know more about your home town. Knowing what occurs are happening at people local effect directly to their lives. Many aspects such as education, health care, finance and new regulations are the topics people really care about. For example, in Covid-19 pandemic, local news helps the citizens updating new cases in their area in order to have some crucial solution to avoid social infection. Additionally, domestic news brings more useful news to people due to the specific area it covers. The news that come from overseas is not always true. For instance, 5G stations response for infection of corona virus and people start to destroy these new station, which make some damage to local facilities. On the other hand, international news acts an important role in the globalization area. The electronic journalism has the power to shrink the globe to a village. The international media brings the advance to people who are far from their relatives. For example, the virus pandemic effect overseas student due to chance to be ill, or new regulations about study online and more news that they need to take care about for their relatives. However, the field that receive the benefit the most is finance. Every second in trade market is critical for entrepreneurs' decisions which can enact the company. Moreover, media also helps the company know the requirements of customer to develop their products. In conclusion, it is hard to decide which statement are more positive than the other. Both of them bring the key features to the readers in variety aspect of everyday life. Votes
Gửi lúc: 19:45:03 ngày 31-08-2021
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People have different views on whether they should focus more on domestic news or international news. In my opinion, people should pay equal attention to both types of news to have a comprehensive understanding of society. Current affairs inside a country are what the citizens should pay attention to because they have direct impacts on their lives and work. If people are aware of the news about the decisions of governments and legislative assembly, they will understand how and why the society is working like that to choose the appropriate behaviors. For example, when listening to the Prime Minister saying on the news that the country will never depoliticize the army, the citizens will not be deceived by the subversive parties. Watching the news about the country’s weather, natural disasters, economic situation or welfare policies helps people know what to wear, where to go, what to invest in to earn money, and so on. However, keeping on top with international news is also of great importance. Due to globalization, countries are interactive and interdependent, which means an event in a country can have great effects on another. A person who is up to speed with global issues and movements can predict what may happen in his own country, thereby making the right decisions in his field. For example, a conflict in the Middle East countries may give rise to the increase in oil price, so a stakeholder can earn more money if he chooses to invest in the oil companies. In addition, being aware of international news helps everyone be confident when they have an opportunity to communicate with foreign visitors or foreign counterparts in a multinational corporation. In conclusion, people should keep on top both of domestic and international news because they have a direct and indirect influence on their work and lives.
Gửi lúc: 16:22:22 ngày 31-08-2021
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Time : 2021-10-23 18:22:33

 

People have different views on whether they should focus more on domestic news or international news. In my opinion, people should pay equal attention to both types of news to have a comprehensive understanding of society.

Current affairs inside a country are what the citizens should pay attention to because they have direct impacts on their lives and work. If people are aware of the news about the decisions of governments and legislative assembly, they will understand how and why the society is working like that to choose the appropriate behaviors. For example, when listening to the Prime Minister saying on the news stating that the country will never depoliticize the army, the citizens will not be deceived by the subversive parties. Watching the news about the country’s weather, natural disasters, economic situation or welfare policies helps people know what to wear, where to go, what to invest in to earn money, and so on.

However, keeping on top with international news is also of great importance. Due to globalization, countries are interactive and interdependent, which means an event in a country can have great effects on another. A person who is up to speed with global issues and movements can predict what may happen in his own country, thereby making the right decisions in his field. For example, a conflict in the Middle East countries may give rise to the increase in oil price, so a stakeholder can earn more money if he chooses to invest in the oil companies. In addition, being aware of international news helps everyone be confident when they have an opportunity to communicate with foreign visitors or foreign counterparts in a multinational corporation.

In conclusion, people should keep on top both of domestic and international news because they have a direct and indirect influence on their work and lives.

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