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Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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Toàn cầu là mặt tích cực đối với các nền kinh tế không nên bỏ qua những mặt tiêu cực của nó. Tới mức độ nào bạn đồng ý hay không đồng ý?
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Many feel that significant benefits of globalization outweigh all downsides. In my perspective, detrimental effects of globalization should be limited by some policies of governments. It cannot denied that the globalization brings people all over the world closer. To be more specific, with the widely spread of the internet, only with a smart phone or computer, people can get a lot of information from other countries. For example, nowadays the situation of Covid 19 pandemic is updated by media every day, so most of citizens know about that and have suitable methods in order to avoid infectious by corona viruses. Furthermore, due to the expand of globalization, people profit a lot from advanced technology and a huge amount of convenient products. It is can be seen that, poor countries can take the modern technologies from developed nations to enhance their economy, their residents also can consume a range of good quality commodities. Beside apparent advantages, globalization also threats small economies as well as culture values and environment. It is obvious that international corporations with a huge amount of capital and modern machinery can easily dominate the market of the poor countries, therefore local companies might come to the verge of bankruptcy and traditional products can be faced with disappearing from the market. As a result, culture identify of each nation gradually have mixed with others. For instance, with the popularity of fastfood chains, instead of cooking meals with their family, a lot of people opt convenient food. It means that a lot of traditional dishes no longer have prepared in daily meals, cohesion between members in families have reduced. Moreover, globalization have created a great amount of waste from industrial zones or chain of restaurants which have affected seriously on environment, caused ecological imbalance. In conclusion, with above explanations, I strongly believe that to be getting sustainable development, people should not ignore the downsides of globalization although it brings a lot of boons for human life.
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Many feel that significant benefits of globalization outweigh all downsides. In From my perspective, detrimental effects of globalization should be limited by some policies of governments. It cannot be denied that the globalization brings people all over the world closer. To be more specific, with the widely spread of the internet, only with a smart phone or computer, people can get a lot of information from other countries. For example, nowadays the situation of Covid 19 pandemic is updated by media every day, so most of citizens know about that and have suitable methods in order to avoid being infected by corona viruses. Furthermore, due to the expansion of globalization, people profit a lot from advanced technology and a huge amount of convenient products. It is can be seen that, poor countries can take the modern technologies from developed nations to enhance their economy; their residents can also can consume a range of good quality commodities. Besides apparent advantages, globalization also threatens small economies as well as culture values and environment. It is obvious that international corporations with a huge amount of capital and modern machinery can easily dominate the market of the poor countries; therefore, local companies might come to the verge of bankruptcy and traditional products can be faced with disappearing from the market. As a result, culture identity of each nation is gradually have mixed with others. For instance, with the popularity of fast food chains, instead of cooking meals with their family, a lot of people opt for convenient food. It means that a lot of traditional dishes are no longer have prepared in daily meals, cohesion between members in families has reduced. Moreover, globalization has created a great amount of waste from industrial zones or chains of restaurants which have affected seriously on the environment, causing ecological imbalance. In conclusion, with above explanations, I strongly believe that to be getting sustainable development, people should not ignore the downsides of globalization although it brings a lot of boons for human life.

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Globalization is process that all country around the world can exchange all things, it makes every country has different main major. Besides, globalization help to reduce product price, competitive quality about product and push all country develop.
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Many people claim that globalization brings a lot of changes to human life. While it is true that economics takes the advantage of globalization, I believe that we should not ignore its negative sides. To begin with, there are several reasons why economics could take the advantage of globalization. First of all, globalization creates trading among countries around the world. Many economic activities have been done. For example, when we try to cooperate with other countries, we could sell our goods to them and buy their goods, too. Therefore, this turnover of the goods that we trade will cause an increase in the GDP of the economics of all countries. Secondly, we can find the perfect alternative goods in other countries. We can consider a typical example: Japan. Japan does not have many natural resources. When the corporate to the world, they could buy lots of resources from other countries in the world. Finally, globalization makes us become more flexible with goods. Nowadays, we can stay home and purchase a lot of goods from Germany, England or Vietnam that we cannot find in our countries. Globalization has brought us a lot of advantages in economics. However, I would argue that globalization has its negative sides that we should not ignore. First, that we open wider means we can also take more risks. According to BBC, there is nearly $100 billion lost when people invest in stock internationally. Secondly, globalization could be harmful to our traditional habits. When people are more interested in overbroad, they nearly lose in mind what their traditions are. It can be affected directly to a nation. Finally, globalization could cause unemployment in developed countries. The boss in developed countries is more likely to hire people from developing countries because they can pay those people lower salaries. As a result, many employees in that developed country are fired and have no jobs to do. In conclusion, globalization has its pros and cons. So we should consider carefully before we make a decision and we could find a way to ease the risk when we globalize at least.
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Time : 2021-09-10 08:35:42

 

Many people claim that globalization brings a lot of changes to human life. While it is true that economies takes the advantage of globalization, I believe that we should not ignore its negative sides.

To begin with, there are several reasons why economies could take the advantage of globalization. First of all, globalization creates trading among countries around the world. Many economic activities have been done. For example, when we try to cooperate with other countries, we could sell our goods to them and buy their goods, too. Therefore, this turnover of from the goods that we trade will cause an increase in the GDP of the economies of all countries. Secondly, we can find the perfect alternative goods in other countries. We can consider a typical example: Japan. Japan does not have many natural resources. When they corporate to the world, they could buy lots of resources from other countries in the world. Finally, globalization makes us become more flexible with goods. Nowadays, we can stay home and purchase a lot of goods from Germany, England or Vietnam that we cannot find in our countries. Globalization has brought us a lot of advantages in economy.

However, I would argue that globalization has its negative sides that we should not ignore. First, that we open wider means we can also take more risks. According to BBC, there is nearly $100 billion lost when people invest in stock internationally. Secondly, globalization could be harmful to our traditional values habits. When people are more interested in oversea, they nearly lose in mind what their traditions are. It can be affected directly to a nation. Finally, globalization could cause unemployment in developed countries. The boss employers in developed countries is are more likely to hire people from developing countries because they can pay those people lower salaries. As a result, many employees in that developed country are fired and have no jobs to do.

In conclusion, globalization has its pros and cons. So we should consider carefully before we make a decision and we could find a way to ease the risks when we globalize at least.

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At present, globalization has been increasingly popular in modern society. Although it brings many advantages about economic, culture, technology,...; the huge disadvantages cannot be ignored. In my opinion, agree with negative sides of globalization should not be overshowed. As we know, the biggest advantage is economic. We can also use products, food, medicine,... from other countries and vice versa. This will help countries grow there economies, consumers will also enjoy it and the world will have more options. But beseides that positive sides, its negative sides cannot be ignored. In this globalization, poor countries and small businesses will disadvantage greatly. In fact, India, China, Japan, Korea,... are the biggest options for US, UK to import transport, medicine, food,... Leads to many small countries and businesses will fall into crisis and debt. Furthermore, financial crisis of one country will effect trading partners. For example, the financial crisis in US had a severe impact on Portugal, Japan, China,... It leads to serious consequences. Next, the big problem is the environment, globalization destroys it. It is also one of the main causes of pollution. Because of the need of globalization and the world, many factories and workshops have been built in series. And they dump untreated waste, poison gas, dust,... to the environment. Si that air pollution and water pollution in most countries are very serious, at an alarming level. Of course, people are suffering from that. Moreover, the ecological environment is getting worse and worse. For instance, invassive species can be devastating in non-native ecosystems sush as carp, snail, goat,.... It's very terrible! Though globalization creates culture advantages, it also can foster harmful homogeneity. In reality, because of globalization, we can know about culture of countries around the world. Like, we can watch Hollywood movies, Korean movies on Netflix, listen to US-UK, K-pop,... on SoundCloud or Spotify. In addition to those benefits, it also lose a local traditional value. The fact that young people only learn about Korean and Japanese food but forget the traditional value of Vietnamese food. And it also less unique and no longer showcase true diversity. Especially, many diseases spread all over the world. For example, Covid - 19 pademic started in China and spreading to other countries quickly, including Vietnam. The pademic is causing economic stagnation, death and many other consequences. In brief, globalization is very important for countries. But these advantages have tradeoffs in terms of economic, environment and culture. Therefore, to effectively implement globalization, all aspects should be studied and balanced.
Gửi lúc: 20:59:51 ngày 17-08-2021
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Time : 2021-09-10 08:35:20

 

At present, globalization has been increasingly popular in modern society. Although it brings many advantages about in terms of economy, culture, technology,...; the huge disadvantages cannot be ignored. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that negative sides of globalization should not be overlooked. As we know, the biggest advantage of globalization is economic growth. We can also use products, food, medicine,... from other countries and vice versa. This will help countries grow their economies, consumers will also enjoy it and the world will have more options. But beseides that positive sides, its negative sides cannot be ignored. In this globalization, poor countries and small businesses will be at the greatest disadvantage greatly. In fact, India, China, Japan, Korea,... are the biggest options for US, UK to import vehicles transport, medicine, food,... which leads to many small countries and businesses will falling into crisis and debt. Furthermore, financial crisis of one country will affect trading partners. For example, the financial crisis in the US had a severe impact on Portugal, Japan, China,... It leads to serious consequences. Next, the big problem is related to the environment, globalization destroys it. It is also one of the main causes of pollution. Because of the need of globalization and the world, many factories and workshops have been built in series. And they dump untreated waste, poisonous gases, dust,... into the environment. Si that air pollution and water pollution in most countries are very serious, at an alarming level. Of course, people are suffering from that. Moreover, the ecological environment is getting worse and worse. For instance, invassive species can be devastating in non-native ecosystems such as carp, snail, goat,.... It's very terrible! Though globalization creates cultural advantages, it can also can foster harmful homogeneity. In reality, because of globalization, we can know about culture of countries around the world. Like For example, we can watch Hollywood movies, Korean movies on Netflix, listen to US-UK, K-pop,... on SoundCloud or Spotify. In addition to those benefits, it also leads to losing a local traditional values. The fact that young people only learn about Korean and Japanese food but forget the traditional value of Vietnamese food. And it (what?) also less unique and no longer showcase true diversity. Especially, many diseases spread all over the world. For example, Covid - 19 pandemic started in China and spreading to other countries quickly, including Vietnam. The pandemic is causing economic stagnation, death and many other consequences. In brief, globalization is very important for countries. But these advantages have tradeoffs in terms of economy, environment and culture. Therefore, to effectively implement globalization, all aspects should be studied and balanced.

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