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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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In this fast-paced world, it is difficult for many people to be able to spend their time preparing an elaborate meal. For this reason, they are compelled to require convenience foods with a view to finishing their meal in a hurry. And for that, fast foods are supposed to overtake traditional foods accompanied by techniques of the process. From my perspective, I assume that fast foods can never be a substitute for traditional foods. First and foremost, it is undeniable that using convenience foods is not as healthy as making own meals along with fresh ingredients. Fast foods are understood to stand for processed foods with common additives like colorants or preservatives, which are chemical substances considered harmful for health in the long run. For instance, according to many prestigious studies, if people usually use fast foods, they will have a high risk of developing health concerns such as heart attack, diabetes, depression, etc. Conversely, homemade meals mean that you are conscious of what exactly ingredients are going into meals; and so you can get a better understanding of what you eat. Secondly, it is traditional foods that contribute to making a distinguishing feature of cuisine in each country, not convenience foods because they are mass-produced and can be easily seen on any store shelves. This also makes traditional foods unique in a way that convenience foods frankly can not compare. In summary, based on the above-mentioned contentions, convenience foods should be regarded as extra ones when there is no choice but to have to resort to them, not as the thing that can replace traditional foods. :((
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In this fast-paced world, it is difficult for many people to be able to spend their time preparing an elaborate meal. For this reason, they are compelled to require consume convenience foods with a view to finishing their meal in a hurry. And for that, fast foods are supposed to overtake traditional foods accompanied by techniques of the processing. From my perspective, I assume that fast foods can never be a substitute for traditional foods.

First and foremost, it is undeniable that using convenience foods is not as healthy as making your own meals along with fresh ingredients. Fast foods are understood to stand for processed foods with common additives like colorants or preservatives, which are chemical substances considered harmful for health in the long run. For instance, according to many prestigious studies, if people usually use fast foods, they will have a high risk of developing health concerns diseases such as heart attack, diabetes, depression, etc. Conversely, homemade meals mean that you are conscious of what exactly ingredients are going into meals; and so you can get a better understanding of what you eat.

Secondly, it is traditional foods that contribute to making a distinguishing feature of cuisine in each country, not convenience foods because they are mass-produced and can be easily seen on any store shelves. This also makes traditional foods unique in a way that convenience foods frankly can not compare.

In summary, based on the above-mentioned contentions, convenience foods should be regarded as extra ones when there is no choice but to have to resort to them, not as the thing that can replace traditional foods. :((

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Life is more and more modern, people are busier and have more demands. They want to save time for jobs, for entertainment activities, besides they also want to satisfy their taste with processed food. Therefore, convenience foods are the best choice for a lot of people today. However, this kind of food is detrimental to health. In order to change this habit is not completely easy. Therefore, I disagree with the idea that convenience foods can replace traditional foods for the following reasons. Convenience food is not as good as traditional food, and the price is cheap, so many consumers choose it because of its convenience. Consumers can find all the places in the supermarket or the convenient shop. Office workers or young people especially are consuming more and more convenient foods by virtue of the advantages this food could bring. It is undeniable that it is convenient and quick to eat this food. For example, it takes a young person about 20 to 30 minutes to cook a meal. Meanwhile, they only need to visit the convenience store or the supermarket to buy ready-to-eat food and it only takes 5 minutes to reheat the food which they have bought. Therefore, they prefer to eat convenience food rather than cook it themselves. Convenient foods are called dangerous foods because there are many consequences behind it. In terms of health, these foods can cause obesity, diabetes, high blood pressure and cardiovascular diseases if we eat too much. Therefore, in order to solve this problem, the first thing I suggest is to raise tax on convenient food. The high price will make people hesitate to buy them. Then they will cook for their own health. In short, consumers should not eat too many convenience foods. Now, governments need to promulgate laws to limit their production, and consumers should spend more time cooking their favorite foods than buying ready-to-eat foods.
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Recent years have seen a drastic change in the type of food people consume. Today, convenience foods or more ...
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Over the past one decade, food habits have changed significantly. Today, we have numerous options available to eat. Convenience food has definitely taken over the pace against traditional food. Some argue that convenience food will become so prevalent that traditional food and its ways of preparation will slowly fade away. However, in my opinion traditional food is going to stay and will not be supplemented by convenience food. Nowadays, young people and children give their preference to convenience food as it seems to be much more attractive and tasty, thanks to the marketing of multinational food making companies. Even professionals give priority to convenience food as it is easy to prepare and take very less time for preparation. They can even have it on the go, it is very convenient for office goers to pick food from outlets and have it on the move without wasting any time. Some reason that having convenience food helps them fulfill their nutritional requirements as traditional food does not provide balanced nutrition. However, there are lots of disadvantages of having convenience food. They are certainly not going to stay for long and would fade away as time goes by, just like fashion. At the same time, traditional food has some unknown attraction that makes it favorite of various generations. Today lot of media houses have started dedicated channels for food making. Some of the shows are favorites of many people. Popularity of shows, such as ‘Sanjeev Kapoor Food Show’ suggests that there certainly is a huge demand for learning and preparing traditional food. Over few years, there has been a significant change in the views of people about traditional food. People think that having traditional food is the healthier option as compared to convenience food. Many schools have subjects included in their curriculum to make children aware of the benefits of traditional food over convenience food.
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Modern life alway make us have to live fast. Therefore, we can’t deny that convenience food isn’t essential in our daily life. We can find it everywhere with the price is cheap and we can use it when we don’t have time.nBut i think convenience food can’t replace traditional foods because:nThe first, traditional food will be good for health, it’s made from natural spice instead of made from preservative substance.nThe second, it’s cooked from local spice, so we will feel the different staste, convenience foods’ staste will not be as delicious as the traditional food.nOn the other hand, it’s the cultural value of the nation. Every holiday will have a different traditional food. nIn summary, convenience food can’t replace traditional foods.
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