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Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


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Some people think that school boys and girls should be mixed. But I don't think other people need to separate their gender. Personally, I think schools should be a mix of boys and girls. n First, parents, teachers and society must work together to help children grow up healthy. It is a good implementation of the three educational environments: family, school and social relationships. If there are both male and female students in the class, it will not adversely affect the child. n Second, gender equality often develops children of pure friendship. I am very happy that a place like the group leader is unanimously selected by both men and women. n However, the relationships that help children develop a lot about themselves are not gender-based. Society develops when children who clearly define their gender are morally good people. We work together so that children, boys and girls, grow together in the same class and in the same school. n Finally, I think schools should replace both boys and girls. This is beneficial for education, especially the growth of children in intensive care by the country's future kindergartens.
Gửi lúc: 23:59:15 ngày 20-07-2021
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Time : 2021-08-10 22:39:58

 

Some people think that school boys and girls should be mixed. But I don't think other people need to separate their gender (diễn đạt). Personally, I think schools should be a mixture of boys and girls.

First, parents, teachers and society must work together to help children grow up healthy. It is a good implementation of the three educational environments: family, school and social relationships. If there are both male and female students in the class, it will not adversely affect the child. Second, gender equality often develops children of pure friendship. I am very happy that a place like the group leader is unanimously selected by both men and women.

However, the relationships that help children develop a lot about themselves are not gender-based. Society develops when children who clearly define their gender are morally good people. We work together so that children, boys and girls, grow together in the same class and in the same school.

Finally, I think schools should replace both boys and girls. This is beneficial for education, especially the growth of children in intensive care by the country's future kindergartens.

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên còn mắc nhiều lỗi về ngữ pháp cũng như diễn đạt. Em cố gắng diễn đạt mạch lạc, rõ ràng, đúng ngữ pháp nhé!

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Several people believe educational institutions should include both genders, whereas others argue that male and female students should be in separate classes. I would incline toward the first opinion for better learning environments. Attending single-sex schools reduces distraction as children’s hormonal and physical changes when they reach puberty. As a result, they are likely to engage in unhealthy relationships that bring critical consequences, namely unintended pregnancies. Therefore, gender-segregated education plays a significant role in the concentration of pupils and academic achievement. However, I believe that delivering proper sex education will effectively solve the mentioned nuisance. Young generations will have opportunities to feature a more comprehensive development while participating in mixed schools. They need to experience various circumstances to bravely face ensuing life issues. For example, studies have shown that a girl coming from integrated schools will handle workplace sexual harassment in ingenious ways better than the one from female-only schools since she was trained to be a socially autonomous human being at her own institution. For this reason, it seems to me that all-gender schools are more likely to create favorable learning environments because they bring all-round development to students.
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Several people believe educational institutions should include both genders, whereas others argue that male and female students should be in separate classes. I would incline toward the first opinion for better learning environments.

Attending single-sex schools reduces distraction as children’s will experience hormonal and physical changes when they reach puberty. As a result, they are likely to engage in unhealthy relationships that bring lead to critical negative consequences, namely unintended pregnancies. Therefore, gender-segregated education plays a significant role in the terms of concentration of pupils and academic achievement.

However, I believe that delivering proper sex education will effectively solve the mentioned nuisance. Young generations will have opportunities to feature a more comprehensive development while participating in mixed schools. They need to experience various circumstances to bravely face ensuing life issues. For example, studies have shown that a girl coming from integrated schools will handle workplace sexual harassment in ingenious ways better than the ones from female-only schools since she was trained to be a socially autonomous human being at her own institution.

For this reason, it seems to me that all-gender schools are more likely to create favorable learning environments because they bring all-round development to students.

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Many people think that school should be mixed with both girls and boy attending while others feel the genders ought to be separate. Personally. I think that school should be mixed both girls and boys.nSchool should be included both girls and boys. Because of some following reasons. first of all, IT show the equal in the school and society. IT is obviously that our society include both girls and boys and They should develop in the same way and same environment. Last but not least, if a school have both girls and boys, students can develop in the natural way. Student Can easily discover and know more about other gender which it takesa alot of time to study about it. nIt obviously that school should be mixed both girls and boys
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Many people think that school should be mixed with both girls and boy attending while others feel the genders ought to be separate. Personally. I think that school should be mixed both girls and boys.nSchool should be included both girls and boys. Because of some following reasons. first of all, IT show the equal in the school and society. IT is obviously that our society include both girls and boys and They should develop in the same way and same environment. Last but not least, if a school have both girls and boys, students can develop in the natural way. Student Can easily discover and know more about other gender which it takesa alot of time to study about it. nIt obviously that school should be mixed both girls and boys

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên còn mắc nhiều lỗi về ngữ pháp cũng như diễn đạt. Em cố gắng diễn đạt mạch lạc, rõ ràng, đúng ngữ pháp nhé!

*don't you ever wish you were someone else*

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There are two schools of thought about coeducation and both are very vocal and passionate about their views. One group of people believe that schools ought to be mixed while some feel that schools must accommodate each gender separately. I believe that coeducation should be encouraged in all schools because it has numerous benefits that will help an individual in the long run. For the people who encourage boys and girls should be separated think that it will be more dedicated for their studies.It is easy to understand because of the interactions between boys and girls after they reach puberty can be distracting. There is even strong evidence that girls-only schools engender better standardized results. There are some reports show that students study in the female-only school can achieve higher scores on national exam. There are many reasons for this but many people think that gender segregation can increase concentration and also improve academic achievement. However, boys and girls are allow to engage in some activities and to do something in school that is useful for their future because there are no companies which will separate genders to work. They have the right to be equal. For instance, if men earn money, women can earn money. To conclude, my opinion is that the parent should allow their children to spend time together because it has benefits for these such as comprehension, and they should provide what the caution between male and female is.
Gửi lúc: 21:59:20 ngày 20-07-2021
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Time : 2021-08-10 22:39:12

 

There are two schools of thought about coeducation and both are very vocal and passionate about their views. One group of people believe that schools ought to be mixed while some feel that schools must accommodate each gender separately. I believe that coeducation should be encouraged in all schools because it has numerous benefits that will help an individual in the long run. For the people who encourage claim that boys and girls should be separated think that it will be help students be more dedicated for to their studies.It is easy to understand because of the interactions between boys and girls after they reach puberty can be distracting. There is even strong evidence that girls-only schools engender better standardized results. There are some reports showing that students studying in the female-only schools can achieve higher scores on national exams. There are many reasons for this but many people think that gender segregation can increase concentration and also improve academic achievement. However, that boys and girls are allowed to engage in some activities and to do something in school that is useful for their future because there are no companies which will separate genders to work. They have the right to be equal. For instance, if men earn money, women can earn money. To conclude, my opinion is that the parents should allow their children to spend time together because it has benefits for these such as comprehension, and they should provide explain what the caution between male and female is.

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cần lưu ý những phần cô sửa ở trên nhé!

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Many people think that every school should be combined between boys and girls to engage in activities together, whereas, others believe that they need not do activities together due to many reasons. This essay will discuss both views and put my opinion. On the one hand, nowadays, boys and girls have the right to engage in some activities together and to do something in a school that is useful for their future because, in the future, there are no companies which will separate gender to work. They have the right to be equal. For instance, if men earn money, women can earn money. In addition, they will have several skills to share, which they will spend an amount of time together. For example, their adapting, which will not feel embarrassed during doing exercise, is easy to approach in the future, and they will learn something, which is unique such as emotions, bravery and others. On the other hand, generally, adults realised that the boy has a negative behaviour such as truant, so they always adjudge one. When children have to engage together, their parents often divide between a boy and girl, for the boy might have been harmful to their kid, who is a girl. Additionally, they might think that it should be better for boys and girls to learn about their specific skills, before spending space together. To conclude, my opinion is that the parent should allow their children to spend time together because it has benefits for these such as comprehension, and they should provide what the caution between male and female is.
Gửi lúc: 21:57:41 ngày 20-07-2021
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Time : 2021-08-10 22:38:58

 

Many people think that every school should be combined between boys and girls to engage in activities together, whereas others believe that they need not do activities together should be separated due to many reasons. This essay will discuss both views and put give my opinion.

On the one hand, nowadays, boys and girls have the right to engage in some activities together and to do something in a school that is useful for their future because, in the future, there are no companies which will separate genders to work. They have the right to be equal. For instance, if men earn money, women can earn money. In addition, they will have several skills to share, which and they will spend an amount of time together. For example, their adapting, which will not feel embarrassed during doing exercise, is easy to approach in the future???, and they will learn something, which is unique such as emotions, bravery and others.

On the other hand, generally, adults realised that the boys have a negative behaviour such as truancy, so they always adjudge one. When children have to engage together, their parents often divide between a boy and a girl, for the boy might have been harmful to their kid, who is a girl. Additionally, they might think that it should be better for boys and girls to learn about their specific skills, before spending space together???.

To conclude, my opinion is that the parents should allow their children to spend time together because it has benefits for these such as comprehension, and they should provide explain what the caution between male and female is.

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên em cần lưu ý những phần cô sửa ở trên nhé!

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