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Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages?


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Nowadays, when the economic of each nation is more and more increasing, many people have tended to drive to work. They no longer use public transport or walk or cycle to their office. This trend have some advantages for them but have many disadvantages for social or even for themselves. Having high salary and income, they accumulate a large asset during few year. They are able to buy some advance vehicles which they can save their time to go to work. That is their pride and a result of their labor. But more and more use their private vehicle that can pollute environment. In fact, there many developing country have many laws that enhibits private vehicle to cease the pollution. Futhermore, when a lot of private vehicles take part in the road, which can cause traffic jam. Using private vehicle to work instead walking or cycling, they have less chance to move their bodies. They are likely to have high rate of heart diseases. To sum up, people should decline to drive to work by private vehicle. They should use more public transport or even they can walk or cycle to work. That can help prevent the environment from pollution and have many benefits for their health.
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In recent year, the improvement of transport plays on important role in our society. As a result people their car work or school instead of walking cycling or using public transport. From my perspective this phenomenon have more disadvantage on the one hand we need to admit that personal means of transport is more convenient than others. First when we drive our car we feel more convenient because we can play the music video which we like, setting which we want on our car. Furthermore, we can decide the time when we go to work, when we go home without my department. Second we can drive with our family, with our friend without caring we can be stolen by strangers . On the other hand, using public transport or cycling , walking have more advantage for society. First, we can have amount of money when we cycle or walk to work because we do not need to buy feel . Furthermore , we can increase our health and keep fit. Second, using public transport can avoid traffic jams and sometimes is traffic accidents. Because when we don't use our means of transport like motorbike or car , there will be fewer activities such as crossing the red light and driving fast. In conclusion while driving by ourself bring and number of advantages, I believe that they pale in to significance compared to its drawbacks .
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As we all know, people are facing environmental pollution such as water pollution, soil pollution, noise pollution, etc. One of them, most developing countries have problems about air pollution issue. One of the causes of air pollution is that people use too many personal vehicles, leading to traffic congestion. Not only that, the emissions of motor vehicles have reached an alarming level, making the air heavily polluted. Although people are advised to use public transport instead of private vehicles, almost no one pays attention. Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, biking or using public transport, a trend that has more downsides. Firstly, using private vehicles instead of public transport only causes serious traffic congestion and the consequence of this cause is to make the air environment severely affected. Secondly, people can walk or cycle to school and work instead of driving, walking and cycling to help people relax, reduce stress after every tiring school or work hour, and help people do exercise your own health. Thirdly, when people use public transport, it also helps to save some fuel and raw materials because fuels and raw materials are only found in nature, if over exploited, it would lead to a shortage of raw materials, could meet the living and daily needs of the people. In short, people should use public transport instead of using private means to minimize the negative actions that are affecting society and the country.
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As we all know, people are facing environmental pollution such as water pollution, soil pollution, noise pollution, etc. One of them, the problems that most developing countries have problems about to deal with is air pollution issue. One of the causes of air pollution is that people use too many personal vehicles, leading to traffic congestion. Not only that, the emissions of motor vehicles have reached an alarming level, making the air heavily polluted. Although people are advised to use public transport instead of private vehicles, almost no one pays attention. Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, biking or using public transport, a trend that has more downsides. Firstly, using private vehicles instead of public transport only causes serious traffic congestion and the consequence of this cause is to make the air environment severely affected. Secondly, people can walk or cycle to school and work instead of driving, walking and cycling to help people relax, reduce stress after every tiring school or working hours, and help people do exercise your for their own health. Thirdly, when people use public transport, it also helps to save some fuel and raw materials because fuels and raw materials are only found in nature, if over exploited, it would lead to a shortage of raw materials, could meet the living and daily needs of the people. In short, people should use public transport instead of using private means to minimize the negative actions that are affecting impacts on the society and the country.

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Nowadays, a lot of people drive to work and school, go to school instead of walking and cycling or using public transport around people. So the trend will probably be more mellow.
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Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or useing public transport. In my opinion it has both of advantages and disadvantages. Adventages are you dont't feel tired, hot or angry with the temperature of summer and the cold wind of winter. If you drive to work or school, you needn't wating for a long time at the bus stop or feel uncomfortable with many people in this public transport. But it has disadventages too. The more people drive, the more traffic jam. We must face with the polluted air, noise pollution, and climate change caused of emission. If we breathe in the polluted air we will have more diseases like respiratory illness. It's very serious. Last, I think we should using public transport to reduce risks of emission and has the best for future.
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Time : 2021-07-26 13:53:16

 

Em có ý tưởng cho bài viết, tuy nhiên còn mắc nhiều lỗi về chính tả, ngữ pháp cũng như diễn đạt. Em cố gắng diễn đạt mạch lạc, rõ ràng, đúng chính tả và ngữ pháp nhé!

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